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Amazing
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:38:06 PM in AEST
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I used to think my life was rough
But people like you show me it's not so tough
My family is no where near as bad
You certainly have many more excuses to be sad
Two years younger and already grown up so fast
Drugs, guys, suicide attempts and lies litter your past
My problems are nothing in compare
But you still tell me you'll listen and how I need to share
You are my comfort
Tell me you love me and how you'll always be support
You're so strong and selfless
Yet at the same time you feel so helpless
Just so you know, I'm always here
And that even when you're far away, i promise to still be near
Copyright ©
killingmehslowly
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Re: Amazing
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:57:08 PM AEST
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This is an amazing write. It's sad yet so tender-n-sweet.
I'm sure it will be treasured.
Keep your tender touch and open heart.
A masterpeice of beauty that our whole planet should learn.
huggs, smiles, luv,
emy |
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Re: Amazing
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:43:17 PM AEST
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A worthy, selfless tribute.
Enjoyed it much |
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Re: Amazing
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:23:14 AM AEST
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Oh this is good, very poetic and nicely writen for your friend.
Keep them coming.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Amazing
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:31:13 AM AEST
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| awesome!!! |
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Re: Amazing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:57:32 AM AEST
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| A promise of a true friend...it's so good to know that people can learn from something so obvious....she's very lucky to have you for a friend |
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Re: Amazing
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by Unheard_Mute on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:39:09 PM AEST
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| great poem sami, you should give it to her, I bet she'd love it |
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Re: Amazing
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:47:54 PM AEST
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| i agree with james, im impressed. |
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