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My Poetry
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:04:48 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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My Poetry
This ink stains the page
Like blood taints a razor blade
These lines are useless
When I can't see them
Though tears of emptiness
It's pointless
To fill a page of blankness
With words that are meaningless
When my mind's emptiness
Can be filled with it
Formatted off rhymed expression
Without a rhythm to go with it
That still leaves an impression
Because it's a part of me
It's my poetry
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-05 22:04:48]
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Re: My Poetry
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:17:22 PM AEST
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I love this...and I can't put into words why...I just do...great work
Love
Lauren |
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Re: My Poetry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:25:55 PM AEST
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| Like Frosted Flakes this poem is GrrrrrraATE!!!! |
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Re: My Poetry
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:41:24 PM AEST
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| I feel like Pooh next to you..filled with fluff.. this is a piece of beauty.. |
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Re: My Poetry
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:32:59 AM AEST
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Now this is poetry, writen well and the flow is awesome.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: My Poetry
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:21:10 AM AEST
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Good write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Poetry
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:03:33 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed reading this. great write.
cheers,
sue |
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Re: My Poetry
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by waos on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:04:29 PM AEST
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this is really good!!! i really liked it. it's original,
eloquent, and i've thought some of thre same
things tho never written them out.
~waos |
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Re: My Poetry
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:17:37 PM AEST
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| Another very well written piece..Your a Goddess |
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Re: My Poetry
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:50:45 PM AEST
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thank you for commenting on my haiku. you are very gifted. I love this poem.
Ginny (girl) |
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Re: My Poetry
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:31:50 PM AEST
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| I'd say you captured all our feelings into one grand poem, nicly done! |
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Re: My Poetry
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:56:25 PM AEST
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Nice write.
Spazzo |
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Re: My Poetry
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:29:30 AM AEST
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I have read several of your poems. You are beautiful.How you touch the pen I think we all would like to be able to write like you.
Next to you
My poems are baby poo.
Your friend Sinned :) |
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Re: My Poetry
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:01:23 PM AEST
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| OOOO Nicely done. Some of my poetry is like this. Very well penned. Keep up the great work. *S* Cynthia |
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