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workin man
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:22:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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from field to field
they take you in
then load you up
on the bus again
its how its been
year to year
never give up
never did fear
to find the love
of a workin man
scared up knucles
but a tender hand
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Re: workin man
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:07:38 PM AEST
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| I've known a of these..this is a tender, loving tribute..great write. |
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Re: workin man
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:20:50 AM AEST
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well stated love the rhythum 2 it verry unique ending
brings back memories of the road, write some more, i like your style . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: workin man
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by ERiN_BuRgEr on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:26:31 AM AEST
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Well I liked it .....even though it was very short it put ur message acrooss....... I got an almost melancholic fell from it .
I think it would benefit from the use of imagey though ....u know , to paint a picture....
It was good though .... I hope to read one a little longer next though cuz i enjoyed reading it....
PEACE |
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