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My Fault
Contributed by
Tru2Myself
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:49:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I see you with her
And I want to cry
I miss you know more than ever
I stand with him but I'm watching you
Wishing I was her
It's funny, You never realize what you have
Until it's gone
I gave you up
It was my fault
I don't even remember why I did it in the first place
I was young and stupid
But now I know the truth
I love you
I always have
i always will
She is my best friend
She asked me if I cared
"No! Of course not, as long as your happy!"
But I lied, and now she has you
And I feel like I've lost everything
It's my fault
My fault, I feel this way
My fault, Your with her
My fault, I gave you up
It's funny, You never realize what you have until it's gone
I gave you up
It's my fault
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Tru2Myself
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2005-01-05 16:49:45]
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Re: My Fault
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:20:17 PM AEST
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| excellent write, I've felt like that before. Once when I had a BF and then when I dumped one. Well excellent write, keep it up |
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Re: My Fault
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by breny on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:09:32 PM AEST
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great poem. it has all the requirements that make poems good *my opinion*. Jarred listed most of them. anyways keep it up!
*Brenna* |
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Re: My Fault
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by jjones12 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:14:53 PM AEST
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It's so true same thing happend to me! it's great!
-Jenna- |
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Re: My Fault
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:39:25 PM AEST
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| I'm with you there lauren, same exact thing happened with me and one of my friends... but it wasn't mad, head-over-heels love, just a quick crush... hope you feel better... |
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Re: My Fault
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:27:44 AM AEST
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how sad, what a beautiful poem, u write well, real emotion stated in a gentle way, sorry 4 your pain
i wish u well, take care . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My Fault
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:49:00 PM AEST
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| ive been there, and seen others in that situation. its one of the situations you never want to be in ever. maybe giving him up was the best thing to do, only time can tell. |
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