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Fallen Angel
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:24:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Raven hair
Crimson eyes
Hateful heart
Full of lies
Wings of black
Drenched in blood
Vengeful mind
Cannot run
Malicious desire
Sadistic intent
Murderous actions
There time has been spent
Foolish mortals
Brutally died
By her hands
She does take pride
Hands stained
A crimson red
From the blood
The humans bled
Ashen body
Adorned in scars
Her own flesh
She did mar
Morbid and cruel
Sadistic, malicious
Apathetic and hateful
Spiteful and vicious
Life enclosed
Within her sin
Demons conquered
From within
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2005-01-05 16:24:19]
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:27:18 PM AEST
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| I love this. And the rest of your poetry writen like this. The style is awesome. This poem is really awesome i love the way it flows...amazing. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by nogusto435 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:31:43 PM AEST
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| wow wut an awesome poem |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:34:15 PM AEST
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| Fantastic imagery!!! Convincing and real....love it! |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:43:37 PM AEST
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| very dark but well written... I like this style. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:12:13 AM AEST
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| ***** amazing |
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