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going out
Contributed by
nogusto435
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:00:44 PM in AEST
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a girlfriend never ment alot to me
but this one, ment more than alot
i have overcome alot of stuff
but right now i think that this is more than just stuff
in my world it would just be me and my friends
but since it isn't my world
i guess i have to leave this one
i can't take this, it's the worst
she is the only girl i ever loved
and the first i feel really believed in me
i wish that this was just a dream
but i dont think that it is, so
to my friends i love you all
to the rest, ***** off look what you did
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Re: going out
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:37:29 PM AEST
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| this doesn't seem like poetry to me, it's more of a statement than anything, but it is a good statement. I hope you find someone new to appreciate you and don't give up totally on the rest of the human race. |
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Re: going out
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by detourchick on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:05:24 PM AEST
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| ha totally loved it awesome way to get **** off your chest |
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