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i drank and drank
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:49:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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where are you
why did you have to say those fatal words
ive been gone for a month in a half
why did i call you
i knew what you would say
i love you
you said i love you
and you knew i still love you
it hurts
i hate the truth
i drank and drank
a nice bottle of scotch would do the trick
with luck i would pass out
rehab hasnt done much
a month in a half never cured my addictions and my pain
i drank straight out of the bottle
to kill my lonelieness
to cure my sorrow
i wanted it all to wash away
all my hurt all my pain
drown it out with alchohol
as much as i could
im a tiny thing
it doesnt take much to get me drunk
i wanted to get plastered
with luck it would kill me
i cried and cried so i drank more and more
straight scotch like grandpa used to do
i always have had grandpas ability to down the strongest of alchohol
i drank until i was on the floor
no way to stand
but im still here
im still alive
and it isnt fair
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2005-01-05 14:49:37]
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Re: i drank and drank
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:50:13 PM AEST
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| I liked this. It was very good. The despair is so clear and I thought the end was brilliant. Great job! (^_^)v |
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Re: i drank and drank
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by travisk on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:27:42 PM AEST
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| liked the train-of-thought style, its what must have run through the mind in sad order |
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