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A Difficult Farewell
Contributed by
BRUCE
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:45:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A Difficult Farewell
I write these words
with sadness in my heart
No greater love could there be
than the love I have for you
You have been my every dream
for all these years
More happiness in my life
I could never have imagined
My heart will break
as I walk out the door
Never to see the woman of my dreams
again in my last days
Know this my darling
you are Gods gift to the world
Every mans dream come true
to have a companion such as you
To have spent so many happy years together
sharing the good and the bad
As I walk out the door for the last time
know in your heart that I will love you forever
Copyright ©
BRUCE
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2005-01-05 11:45:56]
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:50:32 AM AEST
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awww Bruce, this is the saddest love poem you have written up to date, you have written it so well, you always open your heart right up in your poems
pixie xx |
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:00:55 PM AEST
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| Very good write..Solid and true |
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by gherkin on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:18:34 PM AEST
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Very emotional. Not read any other work, but i agree with pixie.
Love & best wishes
gherkin
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:12:50 PM AEST
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Sounds like a spiritual goodbye to me. One you would say if you knew you were leaving this earth and heading somewhere into the universe that we know nothing of. A write from a golden pen. May the spirits be with you.
Dove |
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by paul_x_walker on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:11:35 AM AEST
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oh bruce i no what you mean i lost my cat not long ago he was like my baby good poem
you captured the feelings wonderfully |
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by paul_x_walker on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:11:56 AM AEST
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oh bruce i no what you mean i lost my cat not long ago he was like my baby good poem
you captured the feelings wonderfully |
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by paul_x_walker on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:11:56 AM AEST
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oh bruce i no what you mean i lost my cat not long ago he was like my baby good poem
you captured the feelings wonderfully |
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by paul_x_walker on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:11:58 AM AEST
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oh bruce i no what you mean i lost my cat not long ago he was like my baby good poem
you captured the feelings wonderfully |
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Re: A Difficult Farewell
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by paul_x_walker on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:13:05 AM AEST
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| Oops sorry didnt mean to post this 4 times lol anyway this poem deserves it |
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