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Your Beauty
Contributed by
declinefoale
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:33:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your beauty it blinds me, so shining and bright
Your beauty it guides me, so I don't fall down
Your beauty it Hears me, crying when I am alone
Your beauty it shows me, what life can be
Your beauty it's soft, so not to shock me
Your beauty it saves me, saves me from myself
In so many ways you have saved me
Your beauty it has me
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Re: Your Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:53:20 PM AEST
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| Breathtaking-simple, but complex. I like it...a lot! |
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Re: Your Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:28:13 AM AEST
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You are blinded, but guided, into physicality - or spirituality?
Interesting write . . . not sure If I have every ounce accounted for though. And your title is average - but what's in a name? |
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