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Breaking the blade
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:46:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Slicing, biting in her wrist
Hoping to be lost in that feeling of bliss
But something's wrong this time
She stares ashamed at the red line
She throws down the blade
Wishing that red line to fade
She cuts herself for petty things
She never knew she always had wings
She picks up the blade
For everytime she could have left, she's glad she stayed
She snaps it in half
And for what seems the first time she begins to laugh
Because the blade broke
From that nightmare she awoke
So she spreads out her wings
With invisible angels she sings
No more silent cries of help
In the she finally freed her of herself.
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blueeyedevil13
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2005-01-05 04:46:09]
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Re: Breaking the blade
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:00:05 AM AEST
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| good write keep it up |
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Re: Breaking the blade
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:06:32 AM AEST
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| this is an excellent write and very self empowering. love it |
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Re: Breaking the blade
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:12:58 AM AEST
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A very dark sad write, very poeticaly writen. Good write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Breaking the blade
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:43:19 AM AEST
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GOOD WRITE,I LOVED THE ENDING.
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Re: Breaking the blade
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:07:53 AM AEST
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Gosh, I LOVE this. It's so nice to see a poem where someone overcomes it all and is so so strong.
I know many more could do this too.
A fantastic write, it is very good to see.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Breaking the blade
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:48:33 PM AEST
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| I absolutly love this poem. I feel the same way "she" does. This is amazing. i feel ashamed of the now light scars on my wrists but I am proud too b/c i have finally stopped doing what i knew all along was so stupid. |
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