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Desolate
Contributed by
kyletycz
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:19:16 AM in AEST
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As I walk through this world
The valley of waste
My shadow stands behind me
Even when in great haste
When the darkness is expansive
And the light shall never come
My shadow stands behind me
Helping me along
My shadow is my companion
My shadow is my pride
It is my one and only friend
It is adamantly by my side
Even amungst the darkest night
My shadow walks nigh
Never a step ahead
Never a step behind
Three items of candor
Lie amungst a sea of uncertain
You pay taxes, you die
And your shadow will be your curtain
Your curtain from rain
Your curtain from sun
Your curtain from hurt
Your curtain from everyone
But even though its there
I still feel alone
Even thoughj its there
Im still the only one
Why is it though?
Why must it be?
Why is my shadow,
The only one next to me?
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kyletycz
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Re: Desolate
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by surge_joebot on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:29:12 AM AEST
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| thats really good, i like the feeling, and i understand it |
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Re: Desolate
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:48:27 AM AEST
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| good write atleast ur shadow is there |
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Re: Desolate
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:08:44 AM AEST
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| this was a great poem...and the loved the first stanza...very poweful....good job...very meaningful |
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Re: Desolate
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:14:57 AM AEST
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Oh cool write, i like the images it painted on my head. I love this.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Desolate
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:10:50 AM AEST
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Some amazing images in this.
And I love the questions. I duno, I always love questions in poems, they make a porson see what the poet is thinking.
And the questions themselves..I think we all ask ourselves this.
Great write, thought provoking.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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