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closed doors and bleeding hearts
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:40:48 AM in AEST
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Behind closed doors
In a room without walls
She sits and she cries
While a part of her dies
Empty and broken
Soulless emotions
Do run through her head
The happiness long dead
You made her this monster
This person that's not her
You unknowingly broke her heart
Now torn apart
This nothingness being
Her loving, your deceiving
You didn't say I love you
She thought love meant you didn't have to
Treated her like dirt
Now all she feels is hurt
You didn't care
How could you not hear
Her mind in such strife
You didn't hear her snap when you took her life
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts
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by kyletycz on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:23:47 AM AEST
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nice write, i like the feeling very much
l8r
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:59:28 AM AEST
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Very good writing my friend. It's sad but true so many times.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:24:47 AM AEST
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I could feel the anger in your words...people can be animals sometimes.
very well done
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts
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by SMG on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:45:26 AM AEST
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| this is something worthy to read |
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:47:34 AM AEST
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I like this poem a lot. I especially like 'Behind closed doors in a room without walls'.
take care
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:20:53 AM AEST
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This really cried out to me. I love it.
Especially this:
Behind closed doors
In a room without walls
She sits and she cries
While a part of her dies
Empty and broken
Soulless emotions
Do run through her head
The happiness long dead
I absolutley adore it. It's fantastic.
The rhyme and everything is just perfect.
Keep it up.
*huggies* Phil xxx |
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts
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by hot-shot on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:22:34 PM AEST
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hey dud u hav written very well & wonderfully....it made me sad abt da tergdy..&...lose...but no 1 can change the destny.....
anyway hav fun & hugzzzzzzzzz
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