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sailing on love's course
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:19:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the presence of your beauty
Which no one can defy
Your love so tenderly true
Lifting my hopes up high
For once you touched my heart
I knew i couldn't turn back
For what your presence meant
It meant a whole stack
You tamed my once wild soul
In every way you could
Leaving me bewildered feeling things
I never knew i would
That empty feeling that dwelt within my
Lonely heart
Has set itself a drift, another course on chart
Docking somewhere else far beyond these shores
Crashing waves ascending, the ocean calm once more
For love has hit a place and anchored itself in
Blocked the wound that bled acting as a pin
For when you set a sail
You made the course my heart
Shooting your arrows pointing
Like a target set for darts
So just around the corner love made itself found
Whichever way i turned my face love was a bound
As we set a sail now full throttle ahead
Not looking back on the misery for now it
shall be shed
Now the course is smooth, a sailing we shall go
Far beyond the horizon my heart with love shall flow
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2005-01-05 02:19:40]
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Re: sailing on love's course
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:20:20 AM AEST
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Wwwwooo this is a masterpeice of beauty, wisdom and such passion for life.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: sailing on love's course
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:26:10 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. If only it were true for all.
Great write, sweet and thoughtful.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: sailing on love's course
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by JD_Hamilton on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:52:24 AM AEST
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| Wow that is a really awsome poem...excellently written...and full of great wisdom...beautiful writing. |
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