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The look in your eyes
Contributed by
karmen
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:43:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The look in your eyes,
never pushed me away.
I’ll be here for you,
till my dieing day.
I love you so much,
I don’t care what other people say.
I’m in heaven just by your touch,
your my everything.
The look in your eyes,
so afraid and alone,
caught me by surprise.
I’ll be here always for you.
No need to be afraid,
you should for once,
step out of the shade,
show everyone what I see.
The look in your eyes,
hurt and pain.
You’ve heard so many lies,
I will never lie.
The last thing I want,
to do is hurt you,
I love you more then life.
You should know that is true.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-01-05 00:43:15]
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Re: The look in your eyes
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by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:47:08 AM AEST
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| i liked it, its a good poem, the rhyme scheme is weird but its still good, keep writeng and take a look at my poetry, i would like your oppinion on it |
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Re: The look in your eyes
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:09:07 AM AEST
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| good write not weird well i dont think so mine r weird just gotta keep writing em and gget better |
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