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I Look
Contributed by
enjoiskating6
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:10:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look into my closet and I see empty steel shoulders,
I look onto my table and I see empty cup holders,
I look into my pocket I feel empty cigarette lighters,
I look into my heart and I see black widow spiders.
I look into my shoes and I see ones I can’t fill,
I look into my yard and I see my brain on the grill,
I look into my room and I see fog all around,
I look into my past but it cannot be rewound.
I look into my mirror and I see nothing at all,
I look into my window and I see a brick wall,
I look to my left and I see that nothing is right,
I look to my right and I see that nothing is left.
I look into my future and I am already there,
I look into my TV and I see only a glare,
I look into my life and I see a road in construction,
I look further down the road at an unmovable obstruction.
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Re: I Look
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:17:07 AM AEST
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"I look to my left and I see that nothing is right,
I look to my right and I see that nothing is left."
Great line.
I really enjoyed this poem.
I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: I Look
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:39:25 AM AEST
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nicely worded and great flow overall an interesting concept on life I will watch for more
Michelle |
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