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i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:35:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I finally made it to you today, and the tears burned my face.
you gave me everything that made me happy,
now i am the one to bring the gift
sat down beside you, wipped away the dust and grass,
placed my rose on top of you,
in that instant I knew you were gone ,
but you will never be forgotten,.
I loved you openly and completely.
I never feared any pain from you,
but my worst fear had to come true.
its been two years now, and the pain is still here,
but your not here at all, i can't just pick up the phone and call
but i can come lay beside you every day.
I can see your face on this grave stone.
and i will always love you...
and bring you flowers
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brokenwings
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2005-01-04 23:35:21]
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:42:45 PM AEST
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| Very touching write. |
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:43:05 PM AEST
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| oh this is heartbreaking... the devotion is beautiful... the words paint a vivid picture of the love you have |
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:44:16 PM AEST
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My mom died 2 yrs. ago and this kinda reminds me of when i go to her grave.
good write |
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:45:34 PM AEST
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| awww, such a sweet poem, I hope one day I can ahve a love like that, one that transends everything including death. |
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:43:54 AM AEST
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my heart feels for you your expression of feeling paints the page.
a suggestion though just my opinion in my case I normally wont read or comment on anything that is asking for reads and comments Iv read yours before so of course I was going to read and comment. I tend to stray away from poems that ask for comments as many others on here do as well just a suggestion not meant to insult
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:24:24 AM AEST
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a very sad and touching poem
cheers |
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:43:00 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
awesomely touching.
huggs, luv,
emy
I'm so sorry for your loss. |
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by justjonesy on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:08:57 AM AEST
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| very very touching.....so sad...i hope you're doing well....great write |
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Re: i can bring you flowers but i can't touch you
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by Whitelightning77 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:58:05 PM AEST
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such a touching write... always tough to lose someone.
thanks for sharing!!
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