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A Painfull State of Mind
Contributed by
tin
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:53:43 PM in AEST
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Inhale
His twisted ankle hurts
But he forces himself to keep running
He hates the pain, but loves the pain
The pleasure of it all is stunning
A needle pokes a hole
And a knife leaves a gash
The flame burns the flesh
As his cigaret begins to ash
When he's caught up in the euphoria
He feels he can accomplish any feat
Run a thousand miles, or swim to distant isles
But he's still sitting in his seat
A painting can be beautiful
Perhaps the most beautiful thing you'll find
But so can a wound as deep as your sorrow
If you posses his state of mind
Exhale
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tin
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2005-01-04 21:53:43]
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Re: A Painfull State of Mind
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by meganloberg on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:59:06 PM AEST
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You make me want to rhyme my poems dude
Because you rock
I'm sorry about your friend |
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Re: A Painfull State of Mind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:54:55 PM AEST
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I love the flow.
This is a truely great write.
Sorry about your loss. |
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Re: A Painfull State of Mind
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by brew on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:04:04 AM AEST
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Emotions..that flow with pain. Sorry for the loss of a good friend.....It will heal in time, but never be forgotten.
Brew~ |
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