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Immaginary Girl
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:50:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sacrifice this soul for meaning,
And this is only just the beginning,
Throw away desires of hope and life,
No need for any of this forgotten strife,
In this dungeon of pure darkness,
Where I linger so utterly helpless,
**** this **** I'm so sick of trying,
Over and over again my soul continuously dying,
Officially given up now that there's no need,
Heart so very broken as it starts to bleed,
Lying on this cold floor so shattered and torn,
My hope dangles on a thread so very worn,
Sure just go ahead and use me, it's best,
You're no different from the entire rest,
Making these false promises I always believe,
These promises you know you'll never achieve,
It dosen't matter anyways just let me be,
The immaginary girl that you choose not to see.
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XxNights_ChildxX
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2005-01-04 20:50:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Immaginary Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:25:40 PM AEST (User
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moserator, lmao. sorry. im easily..amused. excellent poem full of emotion. very original and captivating. the best work comes from depression sometimes, but if only it would get us out of it. ::sigh:: |
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Re: Immaginary Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by eden on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:41:24 PM AEST (User
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hi its alicia spending her precious time commenting on your poems lol u know i love them. anyways its very good
-eden |
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