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Tilting Into the Wind
Contributed by
merry
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:20:13 PM in AEST
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Tilting into the wind
Dark cosmos
Off balance
Wobbling like a top
Spin
Feel it happening
Losing control
Slipping
Shaken not stirred
Seems like such a cliché
But apropos epithet
For all that we once were
Disintegrate on a whim
But whose you ask
He keeps secrets in his beard
We watch the skies but never see his face
Zealots weep in vain
He knows them not by name
Tilting into the wind
Hear him coming
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merry
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2005-01-04 20:20:13]
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Re: Tilting Into the Wind
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:26:31 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful gaille, i read it several times and a few meanings came, and i just adore this poem! hugs n' loves ya sis, nessa
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Re: Tilting Into the Wind
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:28:52 PM AEST
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| is it okay that this entire poem went over my head? ::feels stupid:: certainly does make one ponder.... |
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Re: Tilting Into the Wind
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:20:08 AM AEST
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I love the way you put it all out there but underneath a message resides nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: Tilting Into the Wind
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by tin on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:07:50 PM AEST
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| simply fantastic |
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