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House Of Death
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:07:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
scifi
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Thismust be the house of murder
I can hear there quiet voice come out in a murmur
I can hear them still
I can see thier eyes above the windowseal
I can hear the mumur of their vioce
I think I will die at chioce
My hands become clamy
O I sure will miss my family
I can not see you now
but I feel your presents somehow
My leg is tingling
The windchimes keep dingling
The house becomes eiree
A misty fog becomes of the air
I turn fast to see YOu
but you are not there
My heart start to slow
But just in time for the real show
I hear a distace creaking of the floor
My heart begins to beat fast once more
I glance towards the darkness
Nothing but the whites of your eyes gleam
O boy I sure hope this is a bad dream
I can not see your feet move
But your breathing and mine become a groove
closer and closer you creep
shall I lay down and pretend to be asleep?
I feel your feet move through the air
I can not move I am to scared
I see your white teeth as your mouth opens wide
I'm sweating on the outside but screaming inside
I'm waiting for a loud roar or something of the sort
Maybe a death wish something short
I can no longer breath
I become weak in the knees
You step through the shadows and reveal yourself....
It's just my little sister and nothing else..... :)
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2005-01-04 20:07:54]
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Re: House Of Death
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by tractorbabe on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:29:06 PM AEST
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great poem ..i loved it ..nice twist at the end..i wasnt expectin that....its really good.
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Re: House Of Death
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:34:28 AM AEST
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had me going right until the end you took this in steps liked your style it was like watching a scary movie as each scene got more detailed
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