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The Perfect Guy
Contributed by
Sk8ergrl_911
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 05:59:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The Perfect guy see's what I want to be.
He see's how I veiw life even though I never did see.
He has faith in my future, what I will become.
He has such belief that I will do more than I have done.
He knows I will be what I want, and be more than I could ever have been.
He see's me for my personality, and my goals, and the dreams that i have be for so long reaching.
He loves me for who I am, and he will never leave my side.
When people give up on me he's there.
That's the perfect guy for me.
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:05:26 PM AEST
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| Very sweet. A wonderful notion we all share I think. It's a good start, maybe a little tweaking in the structure but I like it. |
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:22:41 PM AEST
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Thank you,
and please keep them coming!
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by Trisha on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:21:58 PM AEST
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| this was nices injoyed reading it |
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by Beniam on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 08:08:40 PM AEST
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| I love it, it has a solid core, and a desirous whimsy feel to it. But I must agree, for you to perfect it, and not to leave a piece of art unpolished. |
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