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Nothing More
Contributed by
Bones
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:20:51 PM in AEST
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Singing faces stare back in the mirror
Swirling vortexes break the wall
My past is eternally dead
I know what you said
That one day, this will be my downfall
But now the water is getting clearer
Blue skies don’t die so easily
The portal to my mind is lost in the sands of time
Nothing feels better than singing the song of ventures
Repeating tracks buzz my internal mind
Deep down inside these voices tell me that I’m crazy
But you keep encouraging the fact I’m sane
Condemned ‘til the face of man is pushed my eyes inside out
Does my words make sense to you?
Flying into the sky with metal for wings
As I fall to the bottom of my purgatory
Copyright ©
Bones
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2005-01-04 16:20:51]
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Re: Nothing More
(User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 05:25:48 PM AEST
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Not bad,
but I think you caould change a few lines
and improve it.
"encouraging" is the wrong word I think.
Maybe "reenforcing"
would be better.
Keep writing.
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Re: Nothing More
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by BEE on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 12:36:23 AM AEST
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VERY NICE I LIKE YOUR POETRY ALL WROTE WELL
PS COMMENT ON SOME OF MY POEMS THANKS
BEE* |
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