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Are you happy you win?
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:12:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sharp, Jagged
it breaks
And tears fall down my face.
This isnt me
not the real me
you'll never see her,
never hold her close.
to her your just a ghost
A shadow in the past
The pain that seeps through every vein...
Blood it stains the floor
as she swims for thoughts.
Screams cut through the silence.
She cut's, and slices away
and what used to be skin
looks worse and worse
each day.
You stripped her of her hope
me, the one who has no faith.
Who wasted everything.....
now it's me whos
tasting blood
while death dances upon me.
I lay in a puddle
of blood.
Drunk dizzyness
and I write very
Slowly in the thick red mess
below me
"are you happy you win"?
Copyright ©
Naughtygurl
... [
2005-01-04 15:12:09]
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Re: Are you happy you win?
(User Rating: 1 )
by karmen on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:33:33 PM AEST
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| its a good poem... i can relate i have also felt like that and i have done that |
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Re: Are you happy you win?
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:43:05 PM AEST
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| Great Poem...Really loved it |
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