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Either a Confused Poem about Someone Or a Confused Someone’s Poem
Contributed by
Blackevar
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 02:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I open my mouth and put on kid’s gloves,
Talking to you is like juggling china,
It’s a fine line between love and hate,
Now, you’d rather straddle that than me,
How vulgar,
Apologies,
What would I do without Kids gloves?
Would I caress you or choke you?
Maybe both?
Kinky,
Maybe not.
The old spark, doused again,
One part water, one part petrol,
Inflamed and dampened all at once,
I should wish to offend you,
As much as you could offend me,
But you are fragile,
Fragile like a rock,
I want to say “***** You”,
As much as I mean “I love you”,
But I suspect you get that a lot.
Copyright ©
Blackevar
... [
2005-01-04 14:37:51]
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Re: Either a Confused Poem about Someone Or a Confused Someone’s Poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:50:38 AM AEST
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| Mm caressed by a boxing glove... stunning imagery ;) There's something about this poem I really enjoyed, altho I can't say for sure what it's actually saying. (I guess what's where the confusion bit kicks in?) Good write anyway lol |
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Re: Either a Confused Poem about Someone Or a Confused Someone’s Poem
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by Lips on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 04:46:46 AM AEST
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| This one makes you think ... and as the title says confused so was I but i sure enjoyed reading it ! |
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