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Ode To A Shower
Contributed by
JD_Hamilton
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 01:03:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hot water on my back,
Reviving my spirits waking my every sense,
Putting my day on track,
For the weary hours of this day so intense,
Trickling down my body,
wrapped around my spine,
Running to my feet,
In one hundred winding lines,
How I live for this fufillment,
Of this simple merry joy,
Everyday when I arise,
Its a feeling that none else can deploy,
The caress of gentle water against my weary flesh,
I never wish this time to stop,
Unless of course to my dismay,
The water temperature should drop...
Copyright ©
JD_Hamilton
... [
2005-01-04 13:03:11]
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Re: Ode To A Shower
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 01:14:15 PM AEST
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Wow!
A truly descriptive write about something we probably all take for granted.
I so enjoyed this and am looking forward to my next shower.
Congratulations, this is a great mood lifter.
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Re: Ode To A Shower
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by breny on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 05:54:44 PM AEST
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lol very funny and a wonderful write. Very descriptive!
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Re: Ode To A Shower
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:09:51 PM AEST
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| Your a very odd man.. |
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