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I can't wait
Contributed by
breny
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:02:34 PM in AEST
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I can't wait to live with you
and see your morning hair
smell your stinky morning breath
and lay in the bed we share
I can't wait to see you
every minute of the day
snuggle up with you at night
and miss you while you're away
I can't wait to start our lives
that we will have forever
because with you by my side
my life could be no better
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-01-04 12:02:34]
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Re: I can't wait
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:50:08 PM AEST
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breny this is verry nice, u do have that flow 2 it and yet it's right 2 the point, love that stinky breath line u sound married lol, keep up the good work . . .
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Re: I can't wait
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:52:02 PM AEST
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| Awww that's such a nice poem, heartfelt...i wish i could share that with someone! TD |
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