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Night Of The Wolf

Contributed by whitewolf999 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

It was a cold dark night, she was lost in the woods. If she had done what she was told then she would be home. But she didn't want to listhen she was angry and upset. And now she was lost, lost agian. Her mother wait at home anxious and scared. Her father was at work he still didn't care. Her dog wait at the door baying to the moon. Her sister sat at the window praying she would be back soon. Truth have it she wanted to turn around but a fog came in and went all around. Very fritened now she lay down to cry. But then she heard a spooy howl rise into the sky. She looked up and was meet by a pair of yellow eyes. Dark black fur shinning in the moonlight. Lips bared and white fangs glisthning. Now she she startedwailing loudly for fear of her life. But the wolf stoped snarling and disappered out of site. Then it came back in its mysteryions way he gave her a look as if to say ,"come I'll lead the way."So she followed the black wolf trusting his words. And the fog started to fad away. Yes this was her lucky day, well night.Her small wooden house came into to veiw. She cried with joy and ran to the door. But before she was to open it she must thank the wolf. But he had disappered back into the woods. Thats when she relized that she that wolves no longer lived in this state. they had all been wiped out so long ago. So this was something that she would never forgot.She she walked into her home all happy and relieved. Exicted to tell her family about the night of the wolf.

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Re: Night Of The Wolf (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:41:07 AM AEST
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Corny and stupid ~ I think not. I think if you rewrote this piece and checked on the spelling, you would truly have a masterpiece. Because of the spelling, at times it broke up the piece. But I can get through that because I am not one to judge but see something for what it is. Very good write and hopefully you would reconsider rewriting this with a little more thought. Thank you for sharing.

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