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Wounded Hate

Contributed by Riot_Girl on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:52:15 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Dark and cold,
this room fills with horror.
Each scream echoes
in every solid corner.
There are no windows or doors,
I am trapped.
With this heavy burden on my shoulders,
I collapse.
The air and the time is fudged
as i gasp for every breath.
Every minute tells me
I'm going to meet death.
As i pound on the floor
I can feel your evil eyes.
They creep down my skin
and my spine.
You watch me slowly die
as i fill with rage.
I quickly stand up
and beat on my cage.
You are suprised i still have power
as i gasp for more air.
As my walls fall,
you start to tear.
I am free although
i will go this way.
As you will live
and i fight to stay.
You laugh because you have won
but i know,
sooner or later
you wont be the only one.

Copyright © Riot_Girl ... [ 2005-01-04 10:52:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wounded Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:57:50 PM AEST
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I really like this. It is full of emotion and i love the last line

'You laugh because you have won
but i know,
sooner or later
you wont be the only one.'

although the whole thing was good. Great write and keep it up
Love
Vampyre

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