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starlight
Contributed by
holy
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:23:22 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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starlight
starlight hang high in the sky
i am recumbent in your chest
bright window lead us to touch starlight
you tell me a lovely story make my heartbeat fast
ever we cuddled in a summer night
then we were still young only saw what we have
i was excited to hold you tight
you gave me a kiss on my lips
tonight we are cuddle together to share our love life
and forget what happened in busy day
our love take fresh air to our bed
i hope starlight to write our fun
listen to your breath i will be asleep soon and have good dream
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2005-01-04 09:23:22]
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Re: starlight
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by holy on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:24:41 AM AEST
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we are sharing the starlight in the cold season.to feel the star-spangled night
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Re: starlight
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:52:10 AM AEST
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awwww holy, very lovely,
your english is getting better and better.
I am so impreesed with the fact that you have taught yourself. I wish I could teach myself your language of chinese as easily!
Keep Writing!! |
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Re: starlight
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by waos on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:00:13 AM AEST
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Wow, that was really really good! I could hardly
tell that English wasn't your first language. I
thought you did a beautiful job on this.
~Waos
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Re: starlight
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by holy on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:38:33 PM AEST
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| hi,Jecks,nice to meet you,i am trying to wrote ,hope my english real get better and better,i think i can with your help ,thanks a lot |
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Re: starlight
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by holy on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:49:49 PM AEST
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hi,waos,thank for your comment,
yes,as you said ,english is not my first language in chinese,and nobody speak english beside me ,but i am very interested for english ,i wrote what that just like my real life and feel,hope you enjoy . |
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