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Has Your Love Died?
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:55:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can I ask has your love died?
Will you push me down heartaches slide?
Leave me to crumble like a broken wall,
Ignore my voice if you heard my call.
When you look into my eyes,
Do you still float up into the skies?
When you hold me do you still feel?
That you still want to spin my sexual wheel.
I know my love for you can’t die,
But still my heart lets out a sigh,
As I fear the worst that we will end,
Forever into your soul I want to blend.
I often wonder what you see in me,
If I make you feel as you say free,
Of if inside I make you feel already dead,
These are the worries that go round in my head.
Please hold me & never let me go,
Tell me your heart still has its beat & flow,
I would be crushed if you walked away,
From then on I’d never live another day.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-04 06:55:26]
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:12:53 AM AEST
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| Good poem - and I'll bet it hasn't. |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:34:15 AM AEST
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Pix this is so touching, its a very sad poetic write. Love the way you put your emotions to your poems I love this; it feels like its about me lol.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by brew on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:40:55 AM AEST
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You always , write such deep emotianlly feelings. Expressive, and deep write. Always a pleasure of reading a write, like yours. Thanks
Brew~ |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:00:22 AM AEST
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| well great write my love has died but i'm tryin to pick it up again |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:22:00 AM AEST
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Awwww Pixie...who could not love such a sweet person :o)
Very well written
Roses
Larry
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:48:15 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write, Pixie. I too, have these moments of panic sometimes. Hugs! |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:35:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem pix.
I loved it.
It was quite an emotional write.
Much love.
MUAH
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:33:37 PM AEST
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how honest and straight foward, wonder if the answer will be the same, a splendid peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:29:55 PM AEST
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heartfelt sincere beautiful writing, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:47:35 AM AEST
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Wonderful write!
It's beautifully emotional and I feel like I can relate to it.
I hope things work out for the best for you. |
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Re: Has Your Love Died?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:31:01 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
Know the feeling or at least I did sometime ein my past.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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