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The Silver Tongued Devil
Contributed by
devilracer
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:09:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Half way down life's journey,
I came to myself In a dark world.
It Is where the straight way was lost.
Standing between trees,
Looking, Searching,
Gasping, My Heart at a Rapid Beat...
Wondering If anyone would hear me.
As I screamed to the release of my soul.
As this embrace came over me.
I didn't know what It was,
It didn’t have a face.
I really couldn’t see,
Wait I can't see anything,
NOTHING!
For there was nothing to be seen.
It Is only to be read...
The Red Woods are speaking,
...Telling me to proceed...
"RUN!" They tell me!
"RUN FAST and FREE!"
For no body In this world
Can ever STOP thee...
My Mind runs In elusive thoughts,
Spilling to the leaves nonstop.
"Use your blood young one",
...Something said to me....
"Use thy blood, as your thoughts
Are a flow before they flood,
No need to censor your vision,
Write as you will,
For page after page
You continue to fill"...
There are mysteries of the unknown,
As I continue to grow.
Do all you can to stop me.
Write as many to corrupt thee.
For you will not ever STOP ME.
As I continue to love how you despise thee.
Even the letters of complaint amuse me.
For the reality it is you who is running,
Running to try and stop my writing.
And all the while I sit back LAUGHING!!!
For it is my words, my work, my poetry,
Slices your thoughts immensely.
To Your Every Thought You can't be me!!
..."YOU ARE THE ONES WHO CREATED"...
~*~THE SILVER TONGUED DEVIL~*~
Copyright ©
devilracer
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2005-01-04 04:09:49]
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Re: The Silver Tongued Devil
(User Rating: 1 )
by wray on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:17:56 AM AEST
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| I was a bit confused by some things (e.g. inconsistent use of "thee/thy") but otherwise there were certain lines that hooked me (e.g. "use your blood young one ... something said to me"). An interesting read, ambiguity and all :) |
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Re: The Silver Tongued Devil
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 02:27:05 PM AEST
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| intriging, keeps the reader hooked on and wanting to read all of the poem. well done |
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