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The wave took away my car
Contributed by
nomadsoul
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:02:42 AM in AEST
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The wave took away my car
It came crashing into my garage
And carried the car to the ocean
Then car was in middle of the sea
Still floating like a boat
With a sad troubled eyes
And then the car went down
To the bottomless sea
Shrieking with bubbles
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2005-01-04 03:02:42]
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Re: The wave took away my car
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by wray on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:03:34 AM AEST
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| Glad to hear your car was all it took. I can't imagine what it must have been like for those who witnessed the violent effects of the tsunami but it certainly never occurred to me that someone would use it as inspiration for poetry.. keep em comin! |
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Re: The wave took away my car
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by brew on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:36:05 AM AEST
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So sorry, to know you were a victim of that. But glad , you are here to write. Prayers are with all of you that had to experience that castatropic happening. Thanks for sharing.
Brew~ |
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