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sail away
Contributed by
mina-1
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:00:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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sail away on your emotions
cast your thoughts to the sea
look beyond your heart and the
horizon to your world you'll see
voyage on the journey
to search deep within your soul
figure out your problem, solve it and
your soul will be whole
do not dwell on the sorrows
that have anchored in your heart
instead set adrift a new course a start
like the ocean beacons your spirit to its long lost call
the past also lingers not succumbing until you fall
too scared to believe in happiness
a whisper echoes through your mind
if you let go
will you be happy with what you find
let the boat of sadness unharbour itself from your heart
lift up the anchor and on a new journey you should start
not knowing what the future holds
in the palms of its hands
set a sail across the oceans
to smoother calmer lands
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2005-01-04 03:00:49]
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Re: sail away
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:28:13 AM AEST
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This is so beautifull that each time I read it I shed a happy tear. Heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
hugss, smiles, luv,
emy |
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Re: sail away
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by devilracer on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:42:04 AM AEST
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| very nice and pleasing to read. |
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Re: sail away
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:51:13 PM AEST
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| It's not bad really..Some of the grammer does need work though..And at times the words seem a bit out of place..Other then that doll..It is good.. |
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Re: sail away
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by polarum on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 01:33:12 AM AEST
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| This is excellent. The word could be the lyrics to an inspiring song. If you are not a musician, find a songwriter. Don't delay! |
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