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Afraid
Contributed by
maxstednitz
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:30:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Here I am
Too afraid to speak
Afraid of moving on
Afraid of holding back
All I've wanted to explain
Is lost inside my head
I am afraid of rejection
I am afraid of embarrassment
I want you to listen
But even that, I am afraid of
I am so alone, and I need you hear beside me
But I am afraid of you
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2005-01-04 00:30:56]
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Re: Afraid
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by maxstednitz on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:36:55 AM AEST
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| comment on this cuz I just needed somethin to express my feelings, and i wanna know if its any good at all |
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Re: Afraid
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:37:04 AM AEST
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| this is a good poem, I think it tells of a place that we have all been to before |
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Re: Afraid
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 01:02:51 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem...and i agree we all have felt lonely and alone/ u captured ur feelings well...well done! |
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Re: Afraid
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:45:57 AM AEST
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i hear ya, great poem i love the rythem of it.
Keep them coming.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Afraid
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by wetnwild on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:23:32 PM AEST
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| Great job! This is exactly how im feeling about an ex right now, keep them coming!! |
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