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You awaken my sences
Contributed by
tin
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:37:19 PM in AEST
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When I see your face,
It's through heavens eyes
When I smell your hair,
It's like the orchids blossom
When I hear your voice,
It's as beautiful as the siren's song
When I taste your lips,
It's sweeter than ambrosia
When I rub your back,
it's as delicatly as a surgeon
If i were to die at this moment,
I would be the happiest spirit in the afterlife
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tin
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2005-01-03 23:37:19]
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Re: You awaken my sences
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by breny on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:48:07 PM AEST
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| Very sweet poem |
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Re: You awaken my sences
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by meganloberg on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:49:53 PM AEST
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| Love the poem, and love you dude |
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Re: You awaken my sences
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 02:55:27 AM AEST
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Love this, this was really writen nicely.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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