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Intelligent words can mess with your mind
Contributed by
Nixzy
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:28:52 PM in AEST
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Here you are again with your intelligent words,
Killing me inside pulling me apart,
Your words seem so powerful and so strong,
You don’t understand how you’re hurting me.
You tell me I’m right the next that I’m wrong,
You’re messing with my mind again,
Who am i?
What am i?
You have changed my view on the way I am,
I can’t even explain who I am anymore
What I’m doing here,
Where I belong,
So please leave my mind alone.
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Nixzy
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2005-01-03 20:28:52]
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Re: Intelligent words can mess with your mind
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:37:03 PM AEST
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| Short but sweet. Nice write |
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Re: Intelligent words can mess with your mind
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by Tru2Myself on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 09:40:32 PM AEST
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| My best guy friend is a lot like this. He is so smart and he says these things that make you think. and he complains about people and how they are all the same and how he is trying to be different. and he gets me thinking what if i am the same as everyone else? what is unique about me? then i start thinking who am i? what am i? haha that poem just reminded me about him sorry haha. great poem by the way. i really liked it. |
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