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let it all go
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:54:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm letting it all go
no more worries
no more cares
I've set it all free
away from her
away from him
away from you
I let them go
I shall flow
where ever I am meant to be
hopefully my mind is completely cleared so I can
see what is to come for me
I accept whatever it is
I accept whoever it is
I accept what is not
the past is gone
leave it there
everyone is gone now
I no longer care
This is my time
This is my year
no one matters to me
cuz i just don't care
Good things are coming
I will it to be summoned
nothing for me to lose
no one here yet for my own
Sick of stress
my patience is tested
sick of it all
everyone can take their own falls
and pick up their own pieces
I have myself to pick up anyhow
why should I care?
if they all shed their tears?
Everyone left me
coldly empty on the ground
no one was around when I went all the way down
so Im not here
im not there
I go wherever I may roam
looking for that special someone
I consider home
JENNI
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Re: let it all go
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:57:06 PM AEST
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| powerful write. I can feel where that is coming from. good job. |
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Re: let it all go
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by shamateur on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 09:09:17 PM AEST
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| great, I love the line about the past, It needs to be left behind- that's how to move on |
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Re: let it all go
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:38:37 AM AEST
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Very powerful write....not many people can leave the past behind....well done..
Umang. |
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Re: let it all go
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:12:39 AM AEST
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| WOW JENNI I LOVED THIS ONE. I SEEMS LIKE ME ALSO. I AM HERE IF YOU NEED A FRIEND |
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Re: let it all go
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:13:32 PM AEST
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| Sounds lonely and strong. Blessings, Jenni. |
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Re: let it all go
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:56:03 AM AEST
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Lonelyness....Yes Ive felt this, alot really...And finally found my special someone I can call my own....Once again you write a phenomenal poem...that I can relate to.
Clark |
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Re: let it all go
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:57:47 PM AEST
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Sounds like you feel as if you know you're going to be lonely but you don't care because you've got to move on to something... else... be it better or worse, nobody knows... all you seem to care is that it's something else. Your strength blossoms right here within these very words.
I never knew. I'm glad I know now.
Lots of love and peace,
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Re: let it all go
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:28:36 PM AEST
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BEEN reading some of your poems and I find them totally different then what I thought I was going to read. I have found that you sure have a way with words and sentences....like
hopefully my mind is completely cleared so I can
see what is to come for me
promise right there that clear one's mind first in order to see in front of their eyes.
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Re: let it all go
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 11:12:37 AM AEST
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I can relate.. I have these problmes and still do.. I liked this poem..
Great.. very well worded and brillant..
take care
christina |
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