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Kite
Contributed by
MissKittie
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:30:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Set loose on a breeze
That smacks
Of long gone, never was
Soaring, soaring
Seeing nothing but the clouds
Dancing a rhythm with the sky
Feeling only
Off kilter and clumsy
Out of place
Out of step
Peering through sunshine
Sighing with effort
( for effect )
It always rains when I'm flying
Updraft is wafting
And wagging a finger
Inside me I say :
Too high, too high
Reel me in
Turn me back
Fold me up
Take me home
To the known and the easy
I've predicted a cloud
In the bluest sky
Now I sigh
( with effort )
For effect
It always rains when I'm flying
Copyright ©
MissKittie
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2005-01-03 18:30:05]
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Re: Kite
(User Rating: 1 )
by SeptChill on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:52:08 PM AEST
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| Wow! I really liked it. There are so many gory poems on this sight that finding one like this makes me smile. There's a lot of human emotion tied into an everyday object and the imagery was good. Applause. |
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Re: Kite
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by Archie on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:01:18 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. I think you went in a lot of directions. I like that about this poem. |
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