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From Ivory Faces
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:51:15 PM in AEST
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Glass faces...
Torn, pieces lay fading.
Tears form, blood drips from ivory faces.
Marble statues, screaming in gardens.
Chess pieces lie abandoned and broken on park benches.
How beautiful creations much suffer.
How we make them.
Take their lives and break them.
Stealing their souls from ivory faces.
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Re: From Ivory Faces
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by unforgiven on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:15:57 PM AEST
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this poem has hauntingly beautiful imagery and imagination. i love the way you write it without a rhyme but yet the words seem to flow so easily and excellently. great write!
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Re: From Ivory Faces
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:16:35 AM AEST
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Unconventional, free verse, abstract and experimental.
-or so in my opinion!
Your descriptive vocabulary provokes detailed imagery...rather effectively!
This piece reminds me of cemetery visits!
I believe that only the creator can produce beauty, giving them the only right to break beauty.
A powerful and meaningful piece.
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