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Escaping Pain
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:19:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Demons surrond me, taking my last breath.
Crimson taste fading back, washing away lies.
Escaping pain, taking the easy way out...I know I'm a quitter...and for that I am ashamed....but I can't live this life of pain...
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Re: Escaping Pain
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:53:53 PM AEST
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| very dark but nicely done. |
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Re: Escaping Pain
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 04:05:49 PM AEST
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| i think the term is won't. |
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Re: Escaping Pain
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by weepingprophet on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:28:57 PM AEST
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Surrender, It pulls at us all in one form or another surrender will always be a temptation. Death is inevitablility, suicide is not death it is theft. Generations will be abolished by the hands of one person. Will anyone ever recognize that we are greater than ourselves? I hated the message, but loved your ability to portray it in a vivid and elegant way.
~suicide has a cradle of survivers~weepingprophet |
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