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Dedicate
Contributed by
caughtinadream
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:55:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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For crushing my heart, and bruising me with your thoughts,
-I dedicate my tears to you.
For making me unable to trust, and always expecting the worst,
-I dedicate my fears to you.
For wasting my life, with the promise of tomorrow,
-I dedicate my years to you.
For taking my friends, to leave me lonesome and alone,
-I dedicate my peers to you.
So thank you so much for all that you've done,
-My tears will always be for you.
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caughtinadream
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2005-01-03 14:55:34]
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Re: Dedicate
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:59:15 PM AEST
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| excellent write. written so well the repetitions didnt annoy me. short and does get the point across. |
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Re: Dedicate
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:13:54 PM AEST
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Thats a really cute poem kristen..i like it i dunno why u say its not one of your best..its wonderful :)
-kaylee |
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Re: Dedicate
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by destinysseduction on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:42:48 PM AEST
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great play on words, with a wonderful well-taken message...good write.
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