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Please Just Hate Me
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:33:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Please say that you hate me
For I have broke your heart
Knowing you still care for me
Is tearing me apart
Why is it you still care for me
After all I put you through
The way that I had treated you
The words I spoke untrue
How I led you on to believe
I truly did love you
So why can you not hate me
To you I was not true
So please just say you hate me
And move on with your life
For knowing you still love me
Is causing me such immense strife
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
... [
2005-01-03 14:33:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Please Just Hate Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyaryssa on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:58:13 PM AEST (User
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I kind of LIKE the simplicity of it, but I think it needs a twist to help it reach it's full potential. Can't say anything specific though, maybe when you discover it on your own it'll become your personal stamp or something, and in that case, congrats! Tis a simple, honest and relatively stylish poem though and I do like it. |
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