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Work, Words, and Water
Contributed by
SeptChill
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:41:08 PM in AEST
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WORK, WORDS, AND WATER
By Katherine Faigen
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
And endless words pour through my submerged head
I am left stronger, things are as they seem
Pull girls! Together we work as a team
Words in the water are those that I said
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
Get angry girls, we're building up steam
Tonight I fall, passing out into bed
I am left stronger, things are as they seem
I'm at a desk, information I glean
And words fall onto the paper instead
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
Into the ocean, where all of my dreams
Become endless words, soon tired and dead
I am left stronger, things are as they seem
Until I change them, and the words scream
Run Girls! And into the water I fled
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
I am left stronger, things are as they seem
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Re: Work, Words, and Water
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:09:05 PM AEST
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| well i think i was going with the flow of it, and not even trying to make sense of it. this is a pretty good poem. well worked format. but the repetition of words for rhymes becomes dull. this was a very original poem. different than i expected. |
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Re: Work, Words, and Water
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:07:52 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. I like it. |
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