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Lost Without You
Contributed by
pixie
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:56:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The other day I almost died,
I sat weeping & my soul cried,
I had lost you or so I thought,
To me a cruel lesson was being taught.
You felt like I didn’t love you anymore,
So on our relationship you closed the door,
But in your heart you hurt so bad,
As my love was the best you’d ever had.
I am not perfect that I don’t deny,
I may sometimes do things that make you cry,
But I know without you I would be so empty,
As from you I get love in abundance & a plenty.
You & I are best friends as well as lovers,
In our love we have found such cover,
I know things have been quite hard,
But in my top role you have long starred.
The thought of losing someone like you,
Makes sadness stick to me like glue,
You have given so much in the last 2 years,
Held my hand & wiped away my tears.
If I lost that I know I wouldn’t survive,
Without you I wouldn’t wish to be alive,
You have helped me face my demons,
Gave me love & explained all its meanings.
This poem is written from the bowels of my heart,
Without you my love I’d surely fall apart,
If I lost you my lover, my best friend,
To my lonely tears there would be no end.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-03 10:56:07]
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Re: Lost Without You
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:01:22 AM AEST
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this poem is flawless. it left me speachless.
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Re: Lost Without You
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:08:57 AM AEST
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| great poetry, keep it up |
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Re: Lost Without You
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by kitty_girl on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:30:18 AM AEST
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| just great |
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Re: Lost Without You
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:39:31 AM AEST
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| Perfect! I loved this... It is the greatest.. I have no words left to describe the beauty of this poem.. Truely Fabulous |
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Re: Lost Without You
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:42:38 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
A masterpeice.
Huggd, smiles, luv,
emy |
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Re: Lost Without You
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by julieh on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:50:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful and written from the heart.....loved it
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Re: Lost Without You
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:03:25 PM AEST
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| Tears had almost flowed. I bet anything that if you gave this poem to the one you love. they will want you back. Hope it happens. wow great write.. PGL... sandy |
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Re: Lost Without You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:26:55 PM AEST
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beautifully written pixie.. this is an amazing expression of words from the heart.. this made me teary eyed.. beautiful POEM!!
peace and hope
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Re: Lost Without You
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:28:52 PM AEST
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Kriss this is beautiful writing, it's such a sad thing to see two people in love breaking up. Im glad you and Mark has sort things out and i wish you both love nad happines forever.
Hugs,
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Re: Lost Without You
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by Tru2Myself on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:11:41 PM AEST
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This poem is truely amazing. I loved it soo much. I love the rhyming it fits so well. Just amazing...I loved this
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Re: Lost Without You
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:09:58 PM AEST
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One of the things I admire most about you Pixie, is that when you write rhyming poetry, you don't force the rhyme ... so few do that well ... sometimes sounding close enough is the best approach. It can even add a bit in my opinion if I have one word just slightly off ... because it draws attention to it's off pattern placement ... then demands that the reader pause and try to determine a better word or phraze ... and it is then you really know ... you got 'em.
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