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Shattered remnants of my childhood
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:37:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This empty feeling inside
Is's where you were before you died
Why did you go?
I'm asking but I'll never know
You called me to say goodbye
When I heard you voice I knew you were about to die
You disconnected the phone
So you could die in peace and alone
I know you thought you had no one
But if you'd remember the all the times we'd had fun
You'd have know I would be there for you
But my heart is bruised, it's all black and blue
I'd always thought I'd see you again
But now my skies are falling in
I'd never thought I'd be the last of the last
You were the remnants of my childhood past
And now they're underground
Covered up to remain un-found
It just seems so wrong
That's not where pieces of my past belong
Beneath the pound of feet and a slab of stone
You should be here with me so I'm not alone
I wonder whether the choice you made was right
To vanish from existance in the light
I often wish to join your side
Then all the Suicide Artists of Vienna will have died
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blueeyedevil13
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2005-01-03 10:37:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Artemis03 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:58:49 AM AEST (User
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I can relate..a lot. I feel the same way, my grandfather died on memorial day 04.
And we were closer than close. Probably closer than I am with my own father.
I loved him so much..and I miss him.
But in some sense he is still right here with me. Great write. |
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:00:44 AM AEST (User
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this is such a sad and moving poem, I am sorry for your pain, hope one day your wounds can begin to heal, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Callif on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:09:52 AM AEST (User
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how sad, good poem
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by julieh on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:58:11 AM AEST (User
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this was so sad, it is so painful but at these times we find an inner strength to enable us to carry on,take care |
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhino33 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:07:24 PM AEST (User
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i can really relate to this, my best freind did the same thing when he past away. i feel the same way, sad poem but great write |
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by tx_graffiti_gal on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:09:59 PM AEST (User
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I am sorry you are dealing with stuff like this. You know the pain your in. So you know the pain someone else will have if you make this same choice. So don't. This poem was very touching. I felt your pain and sorrow, I wish I could say something. Or hug you to make you feel better. Take care.... PGL , Sandy |
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:18:43 PM AEST (User
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Tragic way to spend the holiday. May time heal the wound inflicted by this.
These types of writes always show the world how much suicide does hurt others whether we want to believe it or not.
peace
TS |
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:23:01 PM AEST (User
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powerful and emotional write. brilliant expression. some people would like to think he is in a better place. |
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Re: Shattered remnants of my childhood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:51:11 AM AEST (User
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sad but hey dont follow good write |
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