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Not This Time
Contributed by
Nezenic
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:14:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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GUESS who darkened my day
GUESS who drove me away
GUESS who made me feel meaningless
who made me wish for my endless rest
I need a place where I can hide
I need a place where I can die
I am fed up with all of this shame
stop bringing me to this heartless pain
My loneliness is my valentine
I'll not let you save me, not this time
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2005-01-03 10:14:05]
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Re: Not This Time
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:31:18 PM AEST
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i guess it is the person you were writing about in your other poem? i loved this line,
"My loneliness is my valentine
I'll not let you save me, not this time" amazing poem.
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Re: Not This Time
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:09:42 PM AEST
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I see some determination in this Joe, like the clouds are clearing for you... I also love the last line... it is about time you saw that. God bless Joseph
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Re: Not This Time
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:56:25 AM AEST
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Nice poem...has an amazing feel to it..
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