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Gone

Contributed by burningintherain14 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:42:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Will you be in my dreams at night, watching, waiting for the moment to be right?
Will you sweep me off my feet; while our pretend kisses we share increase?
Will you hold me tightly in your arms and when I say I love you, don’t be alarmed and maybe you’ll say I love you too.
Will you visit me when you get the chance so we can share an amazing dance?
Will you allow me to cry on your shoulder over this loss, without any worries of our worlds being crossed?
Will you tell me you’ll hold me for all of time and promise me that you’ll always be mine?
Will you show me the way into your heart so we will be fused, never to part?
Will the stars at night show you my love even though you’re up above?
Will you explain to me why you left you should’ve known that choice was not the best?
Will you kiss away all this pain inside, and make me oblivious to this terrible crime,
Will you soothe my soul with your calming voice and tell me you’re sorry for making that choice
Will you mend my heart which has been broken, and reveal words to me which were unspoken,
Will you tell me why you chose this track while I sit here knowing you’ll never come back,
Will I have the chance to see you soon so we can snicker and gaze at the moon?
Will you hold me in your arms at nigh, and tell me that everything’s going to be alright,
Will you tell me why you chose to leave everything behind and explain to me what was going through your mind?
Please tell me you knew that I always cared and please remember those moments we shared.




Copyright © burningintherain14 ... [ 2005-01-03 01:42:00]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:33:07 AM AEST
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This is an incredible write!
Really good.
Hope ya feel better soon.
Hugs, smiles, luv,
emy


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:51:05 PM AEST
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excellent write. though a bit repetetive with a few words.


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:05:29 AM AEST
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its very good i enjoyed it very much


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