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I'm Broken
Contributed by
MissMandy
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:33:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel low and
my heart has been stepped on
I feel depressed and
all external feeling has gone.
I feel numb and
I don't know what to do
I feel worthless and
now I know what it means to be blue.
I feel cheated and
I don't really know why
I feel beaten and
I'm too depressed to cry.
I feel misunderstood and
everything's upsidedown to me
I feel betrayed and
I just want to hide and/or to flee.
I feel sad and
I pray it will end
I feel down and
I don't want to be your friend.
Copyright ©
MissMandy
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2005-01-03 01:33:43]
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Re: I'm Broken
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:35:23 AM AEST
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*hugs* you will b ok mandy
SM |
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Re: I'm Broken
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:37:16 AM AEST
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Yes alot of us feel that way right now and i truely understands what your going through.
good write. |
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Re: I'm Broken
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:38:30 AM AEST
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Hi missmandy,
Anyone that can write like this don't gotta worry 'bout a man.
U hear many hard luck sobs but this one is perfect.
I've been there and do understand but one day u'll wake p-n-realize you've recovered.
Hang tuff friend.
huggs, smiles, luv,
emy |
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Re: I'm Broken
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by girish on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:38:30 AM AEST
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sorry for your plight in the new year. read my poems they will definitely give you inspiration. now i can wish you happy new year
girish |
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Re: I'm Broken
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:35:55 AM AEST
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Wow that was just good beyond words, i love this write great flow as well.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: I'm Broken
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by Blu on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 09:29:22 AM AEST
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I have to say it: that which does not kill us only makes us stronger.
Good write Mandy, you'll be ok. *hugz*
Blu |
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Re: I'm Broken
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:53:15 PM AEST
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| im sure boys say that girls suck also. emotional write. |
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