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Help Me
Contributed by
BloodyAngel
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:19:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Dear Lord:
Take this pain away
I will die if it should stay
Make me see my beauty
For helping me is your main duty
Make my tears cease to fall
Lift me up, so I no longer crawl
Let some light shine in
But don't let it burn everything within
Help me to see all the good
Love me as you always should
Force the emotions out
Make me remember what life is really about
Lastly, Please mend my fragile heart
And let me know its safe to come out of the dark
Copyright ©
BloodyAngel
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2005-01-03 00:19:34]
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Re: Help Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:25:21 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. I can totally relate to you there.. I am feeling the same right now myself.. don't worry you will over come the pain.. just have faith and hope that is what got me through everything
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Help Me
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:36:29 AM AEST
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| aww you poor thing i am sure god will answer you.good write. |
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Re: Help Me
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:56:29 AM AEST
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| very nicely written... sometimes you just have to talkt to god |
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Re: Help Me
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 04:20:07 PM AEST
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| just like a prayer. beautiful. |
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