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Mild Disapproval
Contributed by
SlimStaple
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:17:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Do a mime for me
I’ll give you my applause
Even if my clapping is empty.
Frown at me in mild disapproval
When I shake my head and walk away.
Ah maturity, why must we act like children?
I’ll stab you in the back my dear
Even if I don’t want to
Blame my past, just don’t blame me.
So kiss me on the cheek
And hold my hand for a moment
Before walking into adulthood.
Copyright ©
SlimStaple
... [
2005-01-03 00:17:10]
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Re: Mild Disapproval
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:18:35 AM AEST
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wow this is different.. I enjoyed reading it though
peace and hope
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Re: Mild Disapproval
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by Blu on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:51:47 AM AEST
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Wow, lots here. That takes a while to digest. Very good write
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Re: Mild Disapproval
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:24:21 AM AEST
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Interesting write, but I liked it.
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